Category: Allgemein

Don’t mean to bother you, but I love your writing and I was wondering if you have any tips on point of view because I think you’re really good at it. It’s the most difficult part of writing for me, I never know what to use and I always accidentally switch a lot. Thank you!

hmmmm… generally I would steer clear of the 2nd and 1st person since that’s always an icky subject with a lot of people.

other than that, I am not entirely sure what to tell you. choose the person you think might be more interesting to talk through, or even easier to do so. You don’t need to force yourself through a perspective that’s difficult to write, sometimes the other one will feel better because you can relate to that character more.

And if you feel yourself switching, maybe take a step back and re-evaluate whether that maybe happened because the other char is actually the better POV.

however, I usually don’t take it too strict with the POV. Sometimes it’s nice to let the thoughts of another char trickle in without them totally taking over the narrative.

Also another trick would be to just write a part in one char’s POV and then have a little time jump and write the next part in the other person’s POV. you don’t need to shackle yourself, writing should be fun. Don’t make it harder than it needs to be 

God I love McCree figuring out that he’s a cockslut, especially in a/b/o. Just big alpha Jesse laying on his belly, letting the younger alphas practice and giving the omegas a chance to mount an alpha for once. Even the older alphas are welcome. He’s content to lay there and smoke as long as he’s getting filled

ommmgggg

big hirsute McCree lifting his meaty hairy ass for anybody to mount. That tangle of pubes behind his balls is just a humid fragrant space where all their loads inevitably drip into

ohhh man just the tip fuckin is SO GOOD. i love love LOVE young genji being all pushy and beggin his date in the club high and drunk off his ass in a dark corner “c’mon babe just the tip I promise” like good shit gOOD SHIT

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RIGHT??? he would get so fucking whiney for it. Beg his mildly annoyed date, hand beneath their skirt, stroking some clumsy fingers over their panties. he’s not an asshole but he gets this hangdog puppy look and it’s pretty hard to resist.

So they roll their eyes and glance around the club; the corner is dark enough and nobody is paying much attention to them anyway, so they’ll ruck up their skirt and hook a finger into the side of their panties to pull them from their slick cunt.

“Okok. Just the tip. And make it quick.”

He nods with his forehead plastered against their shoulder because he’s too unsteady to stand up straight. He’ll slick the crown through their plump cunt, nudging it against their clit because even when he’s on autopilot he knows how to be good to someone.

One of their hands is curled around his cock, making sure that he doesn’t slide farther inside, and it is kinda cute when he starts whimpering and whining when he gets his cock into them; begs for just a little deeper, just a little more, but they only shake their head and murmur that he should make it quick because they saw their friend exit the bathroom on the other side of the dancefloor and they want to meet up.

Genji doesn’t take long to pump his load into them, nice and warm and creamy. He just puppy ruts, dipping the tip of his swollen dick in again and again (sometimes probably not even hitting the target but that’s okay, they keep their hand around him and that’s just as good with all the slick squelching there.)

He mumbles a thank you and probably wants to give them his number but they just wave off and clean their hand on his pants and skip off to their friend, skirt back in place and pussy pulsing pleasantly from the nice little workout and the cum frothing between their plump lips.

God I want Genji to do this with Aneki/cisswap Hanzo so bad, “it’s not incest if it’s just the tip, Aneki~~” (lier). But she knows how he is and knows he can’t control himself well enough not to just trust in so she curls her hand around his shaft to make sure he can’t. He’s such a dirty siscon snuggling into her breasts and groping her while trying to trust in deeper even with her hand stopping him. She would definitely yell at him for cumming inside.

oh god… Aneki Hanzo who is so much older and calmer than Genji. Doesn’t give him the time of day usually and absolutely doesn’t let him see how hot and bothered she gets. Mostly she’ll look kinda bored while he tries to wriggle deeper and probably has his face mashed against one of her big tits, mouthing sloppily for a nipple.

Genji has a huge huge mommy complex and Aneki Hanzo plays into it so hard.

He got such a nice dick but she can’t let him now how well he’s stretching her with just the tip. Lucky that he’s such a glutton for her tits so she doesn’t have to watch her facial expressions.

HER BEING FURIOUS AT HIM COMING INSIDE IS SO HOT OMG

He gets super whiny and whimpering when he starts nearing his and and she mumbles that he has to pull out before he comes but of course he can’t because the thought of coming inside his Aneki is so hot to him???? like fffuuuck. he pumps her full of his load and all Hanzo can do is bite her knuckle and not show him that she’s coming just from that bit of cock he fucked her with

ohhh man just the tip fuckin is SO GOOD. i love love LOVE young genji being all pushy and beggin his date in the club high and drunk off his ass in a dark corner “c’mon babe just the tip I promise” like good shit gOOD SHIT

RIGHT??? he would get so fucking whiney for it. Beg his mildly annoyed date, hand beneath their skirt, stroking some clumsy fingers over their panties. he’s not an asshole but he gets this hangdog puppy look and it’s pretty hard to resist.

So they roll their eyes and glance around the club; the corner is dark enough and nobody is paying much attention to them anyway, so they’ll ruck up their skirt and hook a finger into the side of their panties to pull them from their slick cunt.

“Okok. Just the tip. And make it quick.”

He nods with his forehead plastered against their shoulder because he’s too unsteady to stand up straight. He’ll slick the crown through their plump cunt, nudging it against their clit because even when he’s on autopilot he knows how to be good to someone.

One of their hands is curled around his cock, making sure that he doesn’t slide farther inside, and it is kinda cute when he starts whimpering and whining when he gets his cock into them; begs for just a little deeper, just a little more, but they only shake their head and murmur that he should make it quick because they saw their friend exit the bathroom on the other side of the dancefloor and they want to meet up.

Genji doesn’t take long to pump his load into them, nice and warm and creamy. He just puppy ruts, dipping the tip of his swollen dick in again and again (sometimes probably not even hitting the target but that’s okay, they keep their hand around him and that’s just as good with all the slick squelching there.)

He mumbles a thank you and probably wants to give them his number but they just wave off and clean their hand on his pants and skip off to their friend, skirt back in place and pussy pulsing pleasantly from the nice little workout and the cum frothing between their plump lips.

I would read 6 billion more words of young alpha Jesse “reluctantly” sleeping his way thru the deadlock gang til he accepts that he’s just a big thirsty slut for alpha cocks. Your writing is always smoking hot and phenomenal I love it and you’re kinda an inspiration for me when I write porn myself (tho we have a few differing kinks). o7 I salute you dude, keep on writing that Good ShitTM. (Also if you want more ideas, have you considered massive toys that can’t be shoved in all the way? ;3c)

thank you for the very kind words T.T Jesse not admitting that he likes Alpha cock (or any cock tbh if we talk outside ABO) is so so hot. he definitely would be the guy to explain it away and find a million excuses for it :’ )

I haven’t thought of toys yet, but they could be good for the wanna-be size queens

Oh man… for abo just the tip ideas, would you consider a little dubious consent? Maybe a young deadlock Jesse McCree. He’s just a scrawny young alpha trying to make his way up the chain of command. It doesn’t really count if it’s just the tip anyways – not like he’s takin the whole knot or nothin, right?

ommmfffgggggg YEEESSSS

it’s not weird if he takes just the tip. Their knots aren’t even remotely touching.

“F-Fuck… C’mon dude, this isn’t.. it’s not funny, alright?” Jesse whispers heatedly, straining to keep his voice low as a gaggle of other Deadlock members sleep just around the corner.

His pants hang around his skinny thighs, belt shucked to have it more comfortable, and Bertie’s hand is cupping his balls, fingers cheekily slipping behind and rooting around without finesse until he finds the small clench of the other Alpha’s hole.

Jesse hisses, fingers curling into Bertie’s shoulders. He lifts up onto the balls of his feet, legs dancing apart until they are restricted by his pants.

“And it’s not funny to wake up to you stuffing your fucking face with my ration, McCree,” Bertie hisses back, a flush spread across the bridge of his nose and his high cheekbones. He looks just as nervous and unsure as Jesse feels. “And if you don’t want me go crying to the boss, you should be a little nicer to me.”

“Fuck you,” Jesse grunts because Bertie’s fingertips, blunt and square, has wriggled into the tight clench of his body. Bertie stinks of Alpha pheromones, but they don’t set his teeth on edge as much as they should have. In fact, he feels nervously aroused. It’s been a while he fucked someone.

“Come on, McCree,” Bertie whispers, face so close Jesse can feel his breath against his lips. His tone has taken on a decidedly whining quality. “Just the tip, man. Nobody’s gonna ever know. Just… Just wanna jerk off into you, hm?”

Jesse groans, belly clenching tight. Fuck, that sounded hot. Fuck. He clenches his jaw for a second. Unclenches. Licks his lips. His fingers are kneading into the fabric of Bertie’s shirt as he throws nervous glances around the dark, dingy hallway. Just around the corner, they can hear the other guys snore.

“Alright,” he finally whispers, embarrassed at how hard he’d gotten. “Just the tip, though. Just the fucking tip.”

He turns around awkwardly, flushing hotter at how he has to hold up his pants so they don’t fall to his ankles.

Bertie is breathing hard and wet behind him and is on him in a second. There’s the clinking of metal as he fumbles with his fly, Jesse biting into his arm, trying to keep quiet. He wants to touch his cock; can already feel the tip being wet and needy, but between stuffing his mouth and holding up his pants, he has no hand free.

And then Bertie is on him, fumbling and cursing under his breath, inexpertly pressing the wet tip of his own cock against the tight clench of Jesse’s hole.

“Just the tip,” he can hear Bertie whisper under his breath; a little sibilant because he’s probably biting his tongue as he stares down, concentrating on the task at hand.

Jesse grunts when he takes the thing, eyes watering with the stretch and burn, lifting up onto the tips of his feet once more.

Bertie groans and Jesse closes his eyes at the fierce throb of his cock. It should be disgusting to get mounted by another Alpha, but all he feels is fierce, unadulterated lust.

“Just the tip,” Bertie whimpers like a mantra, and Jesse ripples around his cock and feels himself getting needy for it, which is when he doubles down on biting into his sleeve to keep himself quiet.