2/ just sort of lying there over sensitive, and the top just spreads his legs and goes to town (after getting a good eyeful of course) Does that sound too cliched though? I really want to emphasise the greed of the top as he screws the bottom and how greedy he feels looking at the cum yknow? Sorry if I didn’t make it clear enough but I kind of struggle saying stuff like this out loud
I would maybe focus on one of the two in particular in this case. don’t just let them moan, let them express their desperation via movements; like the bottom tugging at their own hair/chewing at the pillow/trying to pull their knees up but kind of failing because they’re too fucked out and weak. stuff like that, you know?
and don’t worry about it being too cliche; if you put enough work/detail in it will not sound cliche